Tuesday 1 February 2011

CM: Treatment for our Production:

A Thriller-Horror involving a revenge driven psychopath trying to make the world pay for the death of his brother, by killing lawyers, judges and journalists. Due to the fact that his brothers murderer wasn't sentenced and that the journalist reporting the court case was supporting the decision, and so takes his revenge by killing their loved ones to make the people he is trying to hurt feel the pain he felt. The Pyschopath murders leaving clues for the detective each time. Eventually the Detective closes down on the killer at the last murder but is unfortunately too late to save the victim and arrests the killer. At the police station explains that the psychopath killed his own brother during his childhood, and admits the killer to an insane asylum. This means that his brothers killer is never sentenced. Also whilst at the police station the killer confesses that he wanted to be caught but was not sure why exactly why, but he always had a feeling of guilt about killing the people he did. Once the police officer explains the situation to the killer, the Psychopath realises it is the truth and understands his guilt, and willing goes to the insane asylum for life.

1 comment:

  1. Spell check / punctuation, use paragraphs to help organise the narrative - it's quite difficult to understand as it is.

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